Friday, September 22, 2006

执著
the work scribbled on a piece of paper

假期里
无所事事过着每一天
弥漫的寂寞
不曾离开过
望出窗外那黄昏
沉默中看见
你那模糊的脸蛋
想起那年的我们
希望时间能够永远停留
在那段美好回忆
现在的我
只能逞强自己的幸福
为自己戴上疲惫的笑容
心里却默默地泣


chorus:
为何要执著
为何总不能放下
往更快乐的未来走去
为何要执著
只是明知没有结果
还在逞强着
那天的到来

沉默中
看见你那模糊的脸蛋
想起那年的我们
希望时间能够永远停留
在那段美好回忆
现在的我
只能逞强自己的幸福
为自己戴上疲惫的笑容
心里却默默地哭泣


this song is written by a friend of ours
his handwritting is seriously BAD
even i cant read it
and thanks to gang who typed it out
thats why we call this a work scribbled on a piece of paper

our friend wishs to mask his identity
so lets respect that

personally i feel that this song
dont really rhymes well
but that is not really important

each song tells a different story
and every song portraits the feelings
of the person who wrote it

appreciate this song
and feel the sorrow
of the writer
as he shares his feelings and experience
in life


he is also yet another victim of love
okie he is going to kill me if he sees me
describing him this way

well
most of my friends should know him
this song shows a different side of him
i know that friend as an optimist
he surely isnt one in this song

enjoy!


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we will also like to thank everyone for supporting this blog
we decided to continue posting here even if the exams draw near
so remember to relieve stress by listening to good music
in our playlist of course
and good luck for all in upcoming exams!!

-haoting signing off

Comments:
hmm.not bad.but some parts i think can be vary a bit bah.
 
i feel that the verse is a bit long. can break it into different verses, ie. verse 1 and verse 2 etc.

other than that, i think that the emotion in the song is quite good.

overall, its not bad.
 
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